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Devin Whitlock's avatar

I really enjoy these deep dives of yours! This newsletter reminded me of a quote attributed to Shakespeare about how he had to kill Mercutio in the third act to avoid being killed by him (spoilers for Romeo and Juliet, I guess? Lol). I haven’t written too many pieces with an ensemble cast, but I tend to spend the most time with whichever character has the strongest arc or the most influence over other characters’ arcs. 😄

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I've only watched the JJK anime (but I'm up-to-date on the manga spoilers because, you know, the internet exists) and I LOVE Gojo. JJK is full of great characters, but Gojo is a major scene stealer, and not just because he's so overpowered. I think you explained the contradictions of his character really well and that's what makes him so compelling. He's an unhinged, cocky little git but he's ultimately on the side of good and clearly cares about his students, and he really helps them grow, even if his methods are a bit unconventional and they all think he's a a bit of an idiot.

A character like Gojo taking over the story is quite a common problem I think. Chuuya Nakahara in Bungo Stray Dogs is similar to some extent (though he never takes over the narrative... but totally could) as he's massively overpowered too, which is probably why he's kept out of the main plot quite a lot. He's also a massive fan favourite, even though he rarely appears in the story, because, when he does rock up, he makes a huge impact. One of the biggest risks with writing is accidentally making your secondary characters more interesting, fun and compelling than your primary characters. I try to treat all my characters as equals (they're the protagonists of their own personal stories) even if they're not all equally important to the plot of the one I'm telling. Every character should feel like they have layers to them (which is something I think JJK does pretty well actually... maybe too well in Gojo's case?... even some of the 'bad guys' are likeable and sympathetic to a degree, like Jogo and Hanami... or maybe that's just me??). Sometimes l find it helps to treat my MCs as side characters so that I don't start to take them too seriously and remember to have fun with them: I don't give them all the witty lines, they don't win every point and they don't solve every problem or have all the good ideas. Some characters always end up more fun to write than others though... usually the ones who are complete arseholes or who have crappy personalities, or who have contentious dynamics with other characters... I kind of love writing those ones the most. And I think if a character is fun to write they're usually fun to read.

This became more of an essay than a comment... sorry about that! Love this publication, by the way! Always look forward to your posts.

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