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When I was thinking about why I found the first chapter weird, I think it's because I wasn't really clear on the situation of the characters at the time. Sometimes they show you how the hero was before they became all powerful, and this is what I thought happened in the first chapter with Kiyoshi and the demon, I thought it was his first exorcism. Then I thought a time skip happened and from there he was this 'powerful' exorcist and the story continues from there. I think clarity is important and though I only read 2 chapters it is a thing that really sticks in my craw.

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